DeadlyWhispers

Last Name : Deadlywhispers

First Name: DeadlyWhispers

Mental: Myzaree Think About Herself, She's Villius's Niece Wich loves her uncle, She's not the kind of social person,and she's kinda stupid,She's the kind of person who everyone hates. but people seem to like her anyways

Physical Apperearence: She has Nice Green Eyes,Long Black Hair,She's Average Weight.. and tall.. she's a dark mysterious girl, with mostly black clothing,but sometimes she's just normal

Favorite Weapon: Scythe

Abilities: charm

Distinguishing mark: she has a carved upside down cross on her left arm

History:
DeadlyWhispers wich was borned as myzaree Was A Happy Child,Until Something Killed her parents..wich really terrorized DeadlyWhispers. Since she was an orphan,she decided to move with her uncle,wich she really hated..but then,after years came,she began treating him like her father..But DeadlyWhispers will never give up,she will find the "Thing" that killed her parents,Now,Because of the tromatism she began to think about herself,only herself,and she didn't care about the others,so she began being,Unsociable,Thinking high of herself,acting stupid and snobbish,and hating everything, After lots of interventions of Lord Villius, her sweet uncle, DeadlyWhispers Understood,But she was still acting the same,the same mysterious woman in need of affection, DeadlyWhispers Needed to solve this mystery..wich was unknown..would she be able to do it? maybe with the help of her Uncle,Maybe with the blood of two vampires combine..they will find the key of this unsolved mystery....

Jessy

Welcome to Dark Heaven DeadlyWhispers ^^ Can you organize your character's history into neater sentences? It would be easier to read that way ^^

The name is a lil bit stranger, but well it will be fine i suppose, calling you deadlywhisper all the time will be weird but well, its fine. your presentation as been accepted.